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Post by Angel624 on Apr 14, 2005 0:14:01 GMT -5
Sorry for posting here, but when you said Starlight was taken, Ws, did you mean as on my Tales RPG? Just wondered, since my Tales board isn't a sister site to C03. Let alone it is pretty much dead now.  |
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Post by WingSong on Apr 14, 2005 14:24:56 GMT -5
But see, she wasn't using the name as a Hasbro, so then people wouldn't be able to play the Hasbro - if there's going to be a custom with original colors, they might as well have an original name.
I guess what I meant was that the name was taken, by a different pony, but the pony itself wasn't taken. But a used name is no reason to scrap a custom idea so...
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Post by Angel624 on Apr 14, 2005 15:43:14 GMT -5
Oh, ok. Thanks for explaining that to me, WingSong!  |
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Post by rainbowglitter on May 4, 2005 20:35:38 GMT -5
NAME:BlueStar
AGE:5
TYPE:common pony
SYMBOL:A blue star
COLORS:light blue body white tail and main red eyes
POWERS:Kiss can kill
DESCRIPTION: dosn't know how to control her power, scared of other peple and is varey HUNGREY cencs she did not eat for a long time.
BIRTH PLACE: on a mountain near pony ville
HISTORY:Her parents died on the day she kissed them and she knowes , she some how stumbed in to poneville she hopes to fine a home and a frind. She is sadly reged from lots of homes sencs she keps killing them akdentle when she kiss them good night when thay tell her to. She's tired and want's to have some one to take care of her, she wants to stop wandering from home to home...............
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Post by WingSong on May 4, 2005 21:16:51 GMT -5
Wait...so does she kiss someone whenever she goes into their house? And how can she not control her powers? I don't get it - cause she can control who she kisses, right? And you can't exactly "accidentally" kiss someone, so why would she end up killing all those ponies? And ponies are, for the most part, kind - I don't think they'd dislike her for having no money. |
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Post by rainbowglitter on May 4, 2005 21:23:29 GMT -5
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Post by WingSong on May 4, 2005 21:26:39 GMT -5
Uh...if she was staying with total strangers, isn't it kinda...creepy that she kisses them goodnight? And if they weren't strangers, wouldn't they have not gotten mad right away? And sorry, but here's the big question: Wouldn't she eventually learn not to kiss anyone? And what about all the times before then that she kissed her PARENTS goodnight?  |
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Post by rainbowglitter on May 4, 2005 21:57:00 GMT -5
NEXT!!!  |
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Post by WingSong on May 4, 2005 22:05:11 GMT -5
Oh, okay - but...wait.  Sorry, I guess I'm just kinda creeped out that she stayed with total strangers when they tokd her to kiss them goodnight... |
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Post by Roxanne on May 4, 2005 23:10:28 GMT -5
Ok, RainbowGlitter, we're lenient around here, but this application really doesn't cut it.
The idea of a 5-year-old with the power to kill is really interesting... but you haven't explained it very well. In fact, your whole application seems only half-finished.
Start with her colors. "Light blue" is not enough. What color is her body, and then her mane and tail? What about her eyes? Or is she completely the same color, head-to-toe?
Why is she so hungry? You put it in all caps, but you don't explain it. Is she physically hungry? All the time? Why? Why is this important? Or is it an emotional hunger, like being lonely?
She was born on a mountain? What does that mean? What mountain? What does this have to do with her, her history, anything?
And I'm not even going to touch your "history." It barely makes any sense. Expand it, explain it, try to spell words correctly, write in complete sentences, use punctuation and capitalization properly.
You're a long way from being stamped on this one, and we're really having trouble taking you seriously, RainbowGlitter. If you want to play here, you have to make an effort to write clearly and maturely.
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Post by rainbowglitter on May 5, 2005 20:20:39 GMT -5
O.K i fixed it but i can not spell and i WILL NOT get a torsores ore some thing!
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Post by WingSong on May 5, 2005 20:23:59 GMT -5
You mean a thesaurus?
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Post by Becka *Pone* on May 5, 2005 20:28:31 GMT -5
I cannot even read your bio RG. Not in the sense that I wont, in the sense that I CANNOT understand half of what you have said. Its not in any form of english that my ears or eyes recognize.
O.K i fixed it but i can not spell and i WILL NOT get a torsores ore some thing!
If you want to play here you will make an effort to spell. In the rules it says that if we cannot understand your posts they will be 1) ignored or 2) deleted. Open up word perfect and type up your posts in there, then copy/paste them in here. Then at least your spelling mistakes will be highlighted and you can right click and choose the correct spelling.
And WTF are torores ore?
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Post by WingSong on May 5, 2005 22:16:57 GMT -5
Here: "Okay, I fixed it, but I cannot spell and I WILL NOT get a thesaraus or something!" Heh. I should be a teacher. |
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Post by Roxanne on May 5, 2005 22:28:13 GMT -5
It's better, and we appreciate your effort, but it just doesn't show a lot of effort. We need to know more about your character - expand, tell us what kind of a pony she is, what makes her tick...
Being hungry is not a characteristic, it's just temporary. And your spelling and punctuation are still lacking... We can't just keep giving you specific things to change (holding your hoof persay), you need to take initiative and come up with something really good on your own. As it stands, this is not a playable character.
We have to hold everyone to the same standards here, you understand!
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