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Post by Angel624 on Nov 11, 2004 15:03:15 GMT -5
Ah, so you've seen the animated version of Pippi Longstocking. Well, no, I am not Swede, but I loved watching that movie when I was younger! I still see it on Disney Channel sometimes. Though I have never read the book.
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Post by Angel624 on Nov 15, 2004 21:26:06 GMT -5
Oh, and I updated Shores's bio. I found her at Walmart on Friday, I LOVE her! ^_^ ;D Tehehe.
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Post by Angel624 on Dec 7, 2004 20:47:43 GMT -5
*waits for Becka to read the updated bio.*
*sighs*
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Dec 7, 2004 22:13:38 GMT -5
I'm sorry Dazzle (Angel now I see?), its just not the quality of history/post that I'm looking for in a third Hasbro/sixth character. I think you need some more experiance with RPing, learn how to make your words/sentances/paragraphs flow together and learn how to make your characters deeper. There is alot of promise in this one, its just not quite there yet.
The next storyline should have lots and lots of opportunity for you to expand your RPing ability, perhaps during/after that you will have what I'm looking for.
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Post by Angel624 on Dec 8, 2004 17:00:34 GMT -5
Hehe, yes. Now, on every message board and whatnots, my name will now be Angel624. Ok, so, you're not going to stamp her bio yet? Ok. I'm fine with that.
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Post by Angel624 on Mar 6, 2005 3:30:03 GMT -5
Well, it's been awhile! Over the past months or so, I have tried to improve on my posts! I got a few tips from someone on my Tales RPG! And they helped me improve! ^^ I just wanted to post that here. And I guess if I'm not ready yet for a 3rd G3/6th character on here, then I guess it's fine!
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Post by Angel624 on May 17, 2005 20:50:40 GMT -5
Ok, well, I have thought this over, and have realized that if I already do play a Pippi pony, then, what would the point be of having a pony just like her? o.o So, I am going to try for another 3rd hasbro. Someone else can have Sapphire Shores if they want her. Soo, who might my 3rd Hasbro be? Well, I have looked over the ones that aren't taken, and have settled on Citrus Sweetheart! ^-^ I have wanted a nature-loving pony for a while now, and Citrus seems like a nature pony to me! ^^ Here is her bio, let me know if there are any changes I need to make to it: Name: Citrus Sweetheart Nickname: Citrus Age: 24 Type: G3 earth pony Symbol: Oranges with green leaves and orange flowers. Colors: White body, orange hair(yellow streak in mane). Green eyes with a yellow highlight and a yellow star? in each eye. Orange hoof heart. Powers (if any): None. Description/temperment (how they act, nice, shy, ect): Citrus Sweetheart is a very kind, down to earth pony. Although she isn't a very talkative pony, she still is very friendly. She loves meeting new ponies and showing new ponies around town. There isn't really a pony in Ponyville that she hates, except the very mean/evil ones. When she is around a pony she doesn't really like, she just gives the pony a 'look' if he/she is talking to her. She hates ponies who aren't very nice, especially if the situation is Citrus's family. She can get moody at some points, and it's because of her family. She doesn't really like to talk about them. Her friends wonder why she gets moody sometimes. But she won't speak a word of why she does. This is what makes her a bit...mysterious. Birthplace (or place of the majority of residence): An unknown place far from Ponyville. History: Citrus was born in a place far away from Ponyville. The name of the place is unknown to most ponies. Even Citrus can't really remember the name of the place since she moved away from it a long time ago. When she was around 6, her father suffered from some rare kind of cancer. He died a few days before Citrus turned 7. After her father's death, Citrus's life had changed directions. Her mother would cry a lot, mostly at night, her older sister would get moodier, and Citrus's emotions changed a bit... When she was 13, her mother had to move away for a business trip, she wasn't sure if it was going to be a permanent job. Citrus was left behind with her older sister to watch over her while their mother left. Citrus's sister got a call from their mother 2 months later, and she said that the job was permanent, but the bad thing was that she wouldn't be able to come back home, she had to stay there. So Citrus's older sister was left to take care of her. Citrus moved out of the house when she was 18, after she graduated high school. She moved to Rainbowtopia and went to college there. She didn't really meet anyone she really liked. Some ponies weren't really nice to her there. They would bug her about her family because Citrus had to give a presentation about her family tree, and had to share some history on her family, which was something she really didn't want to do, but had to, anyway. So after college, she moved once again. Citrus decided to move to Ponyville after college(which was when she was around 21). She decided that if she liked it, Ponyville would be her permanent home. Citrus Sweetheart liked Ponyville after a few weeks because the ponies there seemed a lot nicer than the ones she met in Rainbowtopia. and now has a cottage in the grasslands. She doesn't mention her family to anyone now, because she has a bad feeling that others will bug her about them, so she keeps the history of her family to herself. and any other relevant info: Citrus Sweetheart loves nature. She has her own garden in her backyard. She has a home in the grasslands because it is so beautiful in the grasslands and the grasslands is so full of life! She also has an orange tree in her backyard. She even owns an orange male kitten named Simba. Sample RP: Citrus was in her small cottage. She was in her room, looking at a photo album. She was looking at pictures of her and her family, back when she was just a foal. She smiled to herself as all of the wonderful memories came into her mind. She loved her parents very dearly. As she turned the page in her album, she saw a picture of her, her sister, and their mother. Her father wasn't in the picture because the picture was taken after his death. Citrus could feel her emotions build up inside her as a couple tears reached her eyes and rolled down her two white cheeks. She really missed her father and wished he could've had a longer life. She then wondered if her mother was alright. She hoped with all of her heart that she was. She also hoped her sister was ok as well. It's been so long since I've heard from them.... She thought. The white mare wiped her tears and closed the album. She put it back in her drawer, and slowly walked out of her room, with her head low.
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Post by Becka *Pone* on May 18, 2005 12:41:45 GMT -5
You need a sample RP to get a third Hasbro. I wont have time to look her over til next week, so you've got plenty of time to get that up.
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Post by Angel624 on May 18, 2005 19:39:06 GMT -5
Oh, ok. And I've noticed that Whis is trying for Citrus, also.
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Post by Angel624 on May 18, 2005 19:49:16 GMT -5
I added the sample rp.
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Post by Angel624 on May 22, 2005 17:36:03 GMT -5
*bump*
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Post by Angel624 on May 27, 2005 22:39:43 GMT -5
*bump*
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Post by Becka *Pone* on May 28, 2005 21:22:55 GMT -5
Angel, I swear to you, and everyone else, that I will carefully go over the bios with a fine tooth comb as soon as I am able to. But at this moment in time I cannot. Be patient. No more bumps - I know its waiting.
I'm gonna look into get some more active bio mods soon too so this wont be a problem for the rest of the summer. I just need to find the time to do that also.
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Post by Angel624 on May 29, 2005 0:55:58 GMT -5
Alright. Sorry about that.
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Jun 4, 2005 12:57:45 GMT -5
Quite frankly, she sounds like all your other characters. There isn't one thing about her that screams "OMG this character is so different and cool and I can't keep running C03 without her!" Which is really what your third Hasbro should be. I'm not just gonna stamp random pony number x because its really not bringing anything to the game.
However, your sample RP is the best I have seen from you so far. Its not long but it does speak about what she's going through. What's on the inside that others may not always see. Its still a little choppy, but its the best I've seen so far, so your doing better, and getting closer.
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