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Post by Angel624 on Jun 4, 2005 15:13:52 GMT -5
Hmm, I could make her history a bit..deeper, like her sample RP. And perhaps her personality, too. I'll work on that. And thanks for complimenting my sample rp! *hugs* ;D
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 6, 2005 16:50:19 GMT -5
I edited her bio. Do I need to add to her sample rp? Because you said it was short...please let me know if I need to, thanks.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 10, 2005 16:43:42 GMT -5
Ok, I've been thinking of adding more to her sample rp, and I might add some more, I'll have to think of what to put, though. But I've got an idea of what to put. I'll work on that, and if there are any changes I need to make on her bio, please let me know where I need to make changes! Thanks!
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Jun 19, 2005 18:10:37 GMT -5
One thing I'm having a problem understanding is why she wont talk about her family? Is she ashamed of them? Is she upset with them? It sounds in your Sample RP like she loves them and misses them, but she wont speak a word of them to anyone? I'm also wondering how old her sister is that she stayed to take care of Citrus when their mother moved for her job - why didn't her mother just take them with her? This could be a clue as to why she doesn't want to speak of them anymore. And just for your own personal knowledge, I've never heard of doing any sort of family tree report in college Maybe if you were going into genetics and had to research all the genetic/hereditary diseases in your family, or maybe for some sort of cultural history class (although I can't think of why), but other than that, probably wont have to do it. So if you're ever apprehensive about talking about your families past, at least you wont have to worry about it in college
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 20, 2005 19:05:22 GMT -5
Oh. I see.
And I've also noticed you stamped Whis's bio of Citrus. Maybe I should try for another pony, one that I know no one else ts taking.... -_-
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Jun 20, 2005 19:06:33 GMT -5
Perhaps, but she needs two stamps to be able to play that character, so my stamp alone doesn't mean anything yet.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 20, 2005 19:12:11 GMT -5
Oh, ok. And, hmm, I guess I could think about playing another Hasbro. Hmm, I'd love to try for Paradise Palms!! ;D Perhaps I could keep this bio I made for Citrus, but change it to Paradise Palms? Is that ok?
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Jun 20, 2005 19:47:38 GMT -5
i don't see why not
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 22, 2005 16:20:32 GMT -5
Really? Oh, thanks, Becka! ;D Hmm, though I might change the bio around a bit, if that is alright. I'll be working on her bio this afternoon, hopefully.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 23, 2005 17:38:08 GMT -5
Ok! Here's Paradise Palms's bio!
Name: Paradise Palms(or Paradise)
Age: 27
Type: G3 earth pony
Symbol: A white 3D flower with a yellow center and what looks to be 2 green leaves.
Colors: Blue body, solid yellow hair with tinsel, greenish eyes with a yellow highlight(at least that's what I can tell from the picture of her at Ponytopia)
Powers (if any): None.
Description/temperment (how they act, nice, shy, ect): Paradise Palms is a laid-back type of pony. She enjoys company, as long as it isn't a large crowd. She puts all of her worries behind her. She doesn't worry to much, for that matter. She just wants to enjoy life and wait to see what is ahead of her. Her motto is "Hakuna Matata" as it means no worries. But Paradise Palms does have one phobia/fear. A fear for tsunamis. She has had this phobia ever since the tsunami hit the island she was born on(more info about that in her history). She doesn't mention her phobia to anyone, though, she likes to keep it to herself. She enjoys talking to others, and giving others advice. Her advice to others is to lay back and enjoy life. She hates seeing ponies who are trying to work very hard to accomplish something and then their dream gets messed up. She wonders why everyone else is trying so hard to be perfect when really, no one's perfect!
Birthplace (or place of the majority of residence): A tropical island near Ponyville
History: Paradise Palms was born on a tropical island near Ponyville. Her family consisted of a mother, a father, and an orange cat named Scruffles. Paradise Palms never had any brothers or sisters. She is an only child. They lived in a beach home near the beach of the island. Their beach home wasn't very big, it was small, but it was a nice, cozy little beach home. A few palm trees surrounded it.
When Paradise Palms was around 15, their cat, Scruffles disappeared. He never came back home to them. Paradise Palms was very upset because her and Scruffles were very close, so the family went in search for him. They put up posters everywhere they could think of, but no one ever called them, and Scruffles never showed up anywhere. Paradise Palms wonders if he found a new home, or if he died. Paradise Palms never found out what happened to him. She still remembers him, though. And her wonderful memories of her and Scruffles.
When Paradise Palms was around 19, she moved out of the house, and she moved into her own beach home on the same island. She then got a job as a hula dancer, since hula dancing is her favorite hobby. She also met other ponies who loved hula dancing as well. She has been in many hula dancing recitals, and dreams of being a world-famous hula dancer someday!
When Paradise Palms was 24, the island was hit by a huge tsunami. Paradise Palms survived, but her beach home didn't. She didn't hear at all if her parents survived. So she went to visit their home a few days later. She found her parents fixing their beach home. Paradise Palms was so happy to hear they were ok. She told them how the tsunami wrecked her home. And ever since the tsunami, she has developed a fear for tsunamis. Her parents suggested moving to Ponyville, since they didn't know about Butterfly Island, and they have heard of Ponyville before, and heard it was wonderful. At first, Paradise Palms didn't like the idea of moving, so she thought about it for a while. She then decided to, since she liked the idea of meeting new ponies. So Paradise Palms moved once again.
After she moved to Ponyville, Paradise Palms decided to own her own small shop near Dazzling Beach. She was going to own a dance studio, but she heard that there was already a dance studio in Ponyville, so she owns a beach shop. Her shop sells all kinds of beach stuff, like surfboards, bathing suits, etc. She also has her own home in the outer edges, since she does like nature.
and any other relevant info: Paradise Palms loves to hula dance. She owns her own small beach shop near Dazzling Beach.
Sample RP: Paradise Palms was in her small beach shop that was near Dazzling Beach. She then remembered she had some stuff to put up in her shop, since she remembered she was sold out of a certain kind of pony flip-flops.
The blue mare walked into the back to get some flip-flops, and came back out and put them where they went. She smiled as she looked at every cute little thing in her shop. She enjoyed seeing ponies come in everyday to buy some stuff. She got excited when a pony would compliment on how cute the stuff was.
She stood there behind the counter, waiting for someone to come in. But no one showed up. Paradise Palms waited.....and waited........
"Hmm, where is everyone?" She asked herself. She couldn't imagine why no one would want to buy any beach accessories at her shop. She knew there wasn't another beach shop in Ponyville. At least, not except hers. She walked out from behind the register and outside the shop, and looked around the beach. A few ponies were playing around at the beach. She then looked out at the water, and her fear of tsunamis came into her mind. She watched every wave as it appeared and disappeared. She pictured in her mind a tsunami in the water, then shook her head furiously to get the thought out of her mind. She couldn't stand thinking about tsunamis. But every now and them it seemed the memory of the one on that island keeps repeating in her head, and she wish it would just leave her mind permanently, but it was probably there to stay. Paradise Palms was afraid of that...
She went back behind the register and waited. She then opened a drawer behind the counter and found her small photo album that she kept there in case she got bored when no one would show up. She opened the album and found a picture of her and Scruffles. The blue pony smiled as she felt a tear roll down her left blue cheek. She quickly wiped it with her blue hoof and closed the album and put it back. She closed the drawer.
She then saw a pony walk in. She smiled to herself.
EDIT: I added some stuff to Paragraph 4 in her Sample RP.
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Post by Becka *Pone* on Jun 23, 2005 21:04:02 GMT -5
I love the beach shop idea. Because I love beaches, and shops, and mostly flipflops.
However, she's still a little shallow. I want to know more about what happened in the tsunami, how she felt about her house, what she was feeling before she found her parents, and why her parents suggested moving to Ponyville if she loved the beach so much? Ponyville isn't famous for its beaches - its mostly landlocked except for a small lake and the Rainbow River. Seems to me they would have suggested Jadus or Butterfly Island or someplace that was actually on the coast?
Think on that a bit - you've got a good base to work from.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 24, 2005 17:11:27 GMT -5
Ok. I'll work on that.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 24, 2005 17:16:19 GMT -5
I updated her bio. I added more to the tsunami part.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 28, 2005 17:55:42 GMT -5
Hmm, I am thinking of fleshing out her history a bit more. Like, put more detail into it. I could work on that.
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Post by Angel624 on Jun 28, 2005 18:04:15 GMT -5
Ok, I added some detail to her history. Let me know if I need to make any changes!
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